At School
I feel that my higchool days, were the most funny days.
The school is the station where a "child" becomes "adult", and that station has many stages.
All these steps, in my opinion, are pretty, but when I came to the highschool, my life tourn in 180 degrees.
I meet my first girlfriend at these days, I was a little boy, I don`t knew nothign about love, girls, I did not know anything about having a relationship whit a girl. this process was interesting. I remember that girl was so nice, but she had a very jealous personality, and that`s not my way... never, and ewhen I was a child, I only want funny moments, not problems.
Loving plane apart, in terms of knowledge, that period also was good. I learn about more me and my reactions, about the other people, about some therms of the rutinary days, but whit a view "more" mature.
Everything I was doing, I looked for a plane somewhat innocent, but that made me feel more hope in what came after leaving school.
I will never laugh like I did in school, almost everything I seemed funny, my friends and I was experimented the changes in our bodys and our minds, thats was so nice, but somethings, girls was look like monsters.
One of the problmes in my shcool was some teachers, some ones was very boring and outdated.
in the time os school I had a nice physicall condition, I could make so much things in therms of soprt, thas was so nice, but today... my body have so damage, I`m a adult now.
My class-grades was good I studied little and had good grades. now, that`s imposible.
i don`t know wath thing I can talk , more, about my school days, maybe, I was in the school thinking about future, and now I remember the past...
Alonso,
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I feel that my higHSchool days, were the (most funny) FUNNIEST days.
(The) school is the station where a "child" becomes AN "adult"
All these steps, in my opinion, are pretty, but when I came to the highschool, my life TURNED (tourn) in 180 degrees.
I meet my first girlfriend (at these) THOSE days, I was a little boy, (I don`t knew nothing)
and (ewhen) I was a child, I only wantED funny moments, not problems.
(Loving plane apart), in terms of knowledge, that period also was good. I learnED MORE about (more) me and my reactions, about the other people, about some (therms) of the (rutinary) days, but (whit) a view "more" mature.
Everything I was doing, I looked for a (plane) somewhat innocent, …
I will never laugh like I did (in) AT school, almost everything (I) seemed funny, my friends and I (was experimented) the changes in our bod(y)IES and our minds, (that’s) was so nice, but (somethings, girls was look like monsters) (???)
One of the (problmes) in my (shcool) was some teachers, (some ones) WERE was very boring and outdated.
in the time (os) school I had a nice physicall condition, I could (make) so (much) MANY things in (therms of soprt), thas was so nice, but today... my body (have so damage), I`m aN adult now.
My class-grades (was) good I studied little and had good grades. now, that`s imposible.
(i don`t know wath thing I can talk , more)
Cheers,
JC