domingo, 31 de marzo de 2013

Me

The situation is this... I have no idea how the technology works in this part of our era. So, You might think, why this guy decided to make a blog? And the reason is simple, is for my english class.
Obligation. but some times, the obligations are not a problem, maybe, this cyberspace will be convert in a nice place to write some things, make some post, and share everything.
My name, dosnt mater, I dont want to be a public person or something like tht, but I from San Miguel,Stgo. Chile, I like meeting places and people, eat is an activity that i like so much, sleep...
I dont know what the teacher wants, but i think for today, is sufficient.
Good night

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3CibBtq_7Pw
 (a song to mkake more funny my blog)

Now, I talk about me (because the class  forced me).
I dream about travelling around diferents parts of the world, with my band (Im the drummer). I think about a best world...
Im afraid of going crazy, and I interesed in meeting people from diferent places.
On the weekends I like to sleep and go with my friends to nice place.
I am good at imitating people, but I am not good at reading books.
I am glad when  my friends come to my neighborhood. I am sad when I disappoint someone that I love.
I dont belive in god.
I have difficulty with wakening up in the morning.
I laught when I hear something funny.
I cry when a girld that i love, breaking with my :(
I get angry when people dont listen.
I love when I eat a new food :)

END.

4 comentarios:

  1. Hello... I like so much you blog. It has something that make it more realistic than another blogs... I think you are a very define person... Im gonna give you an advice that someone tell one day. There's nothing wrong with being crazy... "There is a certain pleasure in madness that only the insane know", that is a line from Pablo Neruda, so don't be afraid of going crazy.

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  2. Hi well, you should to correct the words like "dont" is don't, "Im" is I'm or I am, "girld" is girl, "belive" is believe.

    Regards

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  3. Dear Alonso,

    Word count: 277- Fine. Writing is a way to become a better person. It works if you have a good disposition. Don't feel forced, just do it.

    You have afew mistakes you should correct, some of these are:

    Remember quesion making? Wh + Aux + S + V + (comp)+ ?
    So the question: , "why this guy decided to make a blog?" should be Why DID this guy DECIDE to make a blog?

    ...IT is for my "E"nglish class....

    but "I'M" from San Miguel,Stgo....

    I laught when I hear something funny... LAUGH...

    Thanks,

    JC

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